next_to_normal | Haiku meme #2

I decided to try this with my old LJ,

10downingst, which was my journal while I lived in England. Compared to the fanfic ones, these sound freakin' brilliant!

Haiku² for 10downingst
to the young and the apathetic raise money stay informed and vote
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Created by Grahame

Haiku² for 10downingst
last night there was a big raucous party on our floor all brits mostly
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Created by Grahame

Haiku² for 10downingst
time out magazine looking for good cheap places to shop and things to do
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Created by Grahame

Haiku² for 10downingst
church where the service was being held they just let the tourists wander
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Created by Grahame

Haiku² for 10downingst
crown jewels are there it's funny they don't even look real
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Created by Grahame

Haiku² for 10downingst
america can allow its dollar to tank no one was dancing
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Created by Grahame

Haiku² for 10downingst
europe and elsewhere are not doing enough to bolster consumption
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Created by Grahame

These actually work. I love the eloquence of the next to the last one. No one was dancing, and now the music's come to a stop, too.

I was surprised how logical they sounded, after the first set. I wonder if that's a reflection on my journaling skills? lol

Yes, a definitive improvement.

Haha, clearly real journal entries produce more coherent haiku than fanfic...